Sunday, 17 May 2015

Laid Down

Laid Down       
By Ben McGechan

Soldiers falling like shot ducks
once alive now in a endless sleep many pray
but don’t get their wish
and are laid down to rest
now we remember them
for what they did for our countryImage result for world war 1
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We Will Remember them

4 comments:

  1. WOW this has so much deatail in this story Ben keep up the good work

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  2. ben, this is a great poem, l like it a lot.

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  3. i thought it was definitely WOW work and i liked it when you wrote once alive now in a endless sleep.

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  4. This is a very descriptive piece of work because it gave me a clear picture!

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