Wednesday, 27 May 2015

Snow description by Kaia

Snowballs whizzing through the air and exploding on Oscar's rake.
Snowballs darting out of nowhere, slapping me on the back.
Snowballs flying back and forth, landing with a plop.
Grace hurling snowballs at Oscar in a frenzy.
Snowmen staring at me, cold and lifeless.
Snowmen falling apart, 
melting as it gets warmer.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous17 June 2015 at 17:20

    Great Snow description Kaia I think you are a great writer in Room 11! :)

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  2. Anonymous17 June 2015 at 17:25

    Awesome description of your writing I never knew that you were such a great writer!

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  3. Anonymous22 June 2015 at 23:29

    nice descriptive writing I personally enjoyed reading this:)

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  4. Anonymous23 July 2015 at 00:16

    Hi Kaia, I love your writing, I love the use of short sentences, mostly the 5th line, Cold and lifeless, amazing. Well done, I can't wait to see more writing like this in the future.

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