Laid Down
By Ben McGechan
Soldiers falling like shot ducks
once alive now in a endless sleep many pray
but don’t get their wish
and are laid down to rest
now we remember them
for what they did for our country
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We Will Remember them
WOW this has so much deatail in this story Ben keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteben, this is a great poem, l like it a lot.
ReplyDeletei thought it was definitely WOW work and i liked it when you wrote once alive now in a endless sleep.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very descriptive piece of work because it gave me a clear picture!
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