Monday, 8 June 2015

My Birthday Story

“Leap here we come!” I shouted quietly. It was my birthday today and we were to leap with Jade. We arrived at leap and went in. There were lots and lots of trampolines, there was an air bag a dodge ball even a basket ball area. Mum had checked us in earlier on and got our wristbands.We waited a while until two o’clock, then my cousins arrived, they were just in time to hear the rules.
“OK everyone listen up please!”One of the staff members said. “No pushing no shoes and last but not least HAVE FUN!”
We ran like a herd elephants onto the trampolines trying to get past.We bounced and had a game of dodge ball for about two hours, then time was up, we had to leave
We got in the car and I said to Jade
“ That will be an experience I will never forget !”

4 comments:

  1. That was a great piece of writing Kayla!

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  2. There was so much detail in this peace of work Kayla!

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  3. Great story Kayla it sounded like you had heaps of fun on your birthday!

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  4. Wow Kayla great description in your writing!

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